In many countries, obesity in children is an increasing health problem. What do you think are some of the causes, and what are some of the solutions to the problem.
Yeah, it is very much true that obesity is the rising health concern among childrens. There are many causes for this,
I would like to list some like bad eating habbits, pregnancy effect like high dibetis on growing embryo, less knwoledge
about bad effect of not eating healthy food. Solutions to all these cause would be to avoid these cause and make oneself aware
about good food choices.
Fistofall, bad eating habits. Now a days many parents unknowingly encourage kid's bad food choices which later turn into kid's habit.
I see many childrens going for fast food like Mac burger, pizza which are not healthy options and they in turn lead to obesity.
I think it's is parents duty to make kid aware about bad food and not to encourage their bad eating habits. This can be easily avoided
if parents put strict rule and time table for eating so that kids can have variety of vegetables in their diet.
Secondly, not taking care of oneself during pregnancy can cause negative impact on child's health.
I believe some illness kids gets from their parents, if mommy doesn't take care of herself during pregnancy she may get
high diabetis this could cause many health issue for developing embryo and later this child becomes more prone to become fatty.
So one can avoid this by taking care of lady during pregnancy, what I mean by taking care here is that expected mommy
should eat less sugary product so that they can avoid getting dibetis and should put check on weight so they would be under healthy weight gain range.
Finally, less knowledge about healthy eating and it's goodness to body. I think if someone has knowledge
about what all nutrient this perticular food is going to give to their body they would more likely choose healthy food. If you know that maggi is going to cause strain on kidneies to filter it and put pressure on your liver no one would like to go for it knowing this facts.
So I think it is very important to make people knowledgable about healthy food and unhealthy food and it's ill effect on body.
In conclusion, with all above reason mentioned I think obesity is increasing concerns among growing children and one can avoid by avoiding going for healthy food, taking care of oneself during pregnancy, making oneself knowledgable about food and it's nuttrient content.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...oices. Fistofall, bad eating habits. Now a days many parents unknowingly encourage kids...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
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Suggestion:
...o body. I think if someone has knowledge about what all nutrient this perticular ...
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... no one would like to go for it knowing this facts. So I think it is very important...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'i mean', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258139534884 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.179069767442 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0976744186047 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046511627907 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0674418604651 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127906976744 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0558139534884 0.0351676179071 159% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.18044401553 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325581395349 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0395348837209 0.0887237588012 45% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0348837209302 0.0209618222197 166% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093023255814 0.0139019557991 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2312.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 401.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76558603491 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311720698254 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201995012469 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1072319202 0.174417080927 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0673316708229 0.112833075102 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18044401553 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486284289277 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.7730947734 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0625 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3601446385 48.84282405 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.5376344086 375% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 45.2620012469 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.50793650794 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223859352168 0.300154397459 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121734627355 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0722439657697 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.801881956387 0.497263757937 161% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.236845489812 0.151897553556 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796293771589 0.114077575197 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399377273745 0.0781384742642 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.110601685307 0.336927656856 33% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.075945542124 0.067059652881 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771843516004 0.210909579961 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494844516521 0.0618886996521 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.