Many decisions in our life should be taken carefully and is a specifict time, this is due to their importance to draw our future correctly. A ny delay in takeing any decision may has a negative effect on our life. The question is, whether, in the past, our kids depend on us to make these decision and today become able to make their decision independently or the opposit. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, till now some people depend our their parent to make their decision. They believe that, parent have many skills any experience which enable them to give advices for their children. In my opinion, I concur with the statement that todays kids are more able to make decision about their own life than in the past.
First, with the tenedious development in technology in these days, like invention of smart device and presence of internet. It become easily for every person to seek about truth. kids can search by using these devices ton figure out any thing in this life. This is example from my real life. when mu son in high school. I ask him which major due want to study when attend collage. He answer me, He did a lot of searching in Google to know which type of study make him find good career in the future. In the en, he decide to study siber security, He mentions, any bussiness need this feild, therefore there is a high chance for him ton find his drem future job. as you can see with thevadvance of technology, our kids can take their decision independently.
Second, today, our kids are more responsible than before many years. theyb have more social communication. moreover, they know many people from playing vedio games. this help them to abroad trheir horizon and get a lot of skills and experience which help them to take their decision with out dependingb on any person, just take advice and share their parent with their decision.
In conclusion, This statement ia as persausive as it stands, this is based on expositions that mentioned above. youing people to day have many skills due to their communication with many people. furthermore, development of technology help them a lot to be familiarv with many types of career any selectb which on better for them.
Many decisions in our life should be taken carefully and is a specifict time, this is due to their importance to draw our future correctly. A ny delay in takeing any decision may has a negative effect on our life. The question is, whether, in the past, our kids depend on us to make these decision and today become able to make their decision independently or the opposit. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, till now some people depend our their parent to make their decision. They believe that, parent have many skills any experience which enable them to give advices for their children. In my opinion, I concur with the statement that todays kids are more able to make decision about their own life than in the past.
First, with the tenedious development in technology in these days, like invention of smart device and presence of internet. It become easily for every person to seek about truth. kids can search by using these devices ton figure out any thing in this life. This is example from my real life. when mu son in high school. I ask him which major due want to study when attend collage. He answer me, He did a lot of searching in Google to know which type of study make him find good career in the future. In the en, he decide to study siber security, He mentions, any bussiness need this feild, therefore there is a high chance for him ton find his drem future job. as you can see with thevadvance of technology, our kids can take their decision independently.
Second, today, our kids are more responsible than before many years. theyb have more social communication. moreover, they know many people from playing vedio games. this help them to abroad trheir horizon and get a lot of skills and experience which help them to take their decision with out dependingb on any person, just take advice and share their parent with their decision.
In conclusion, This statement ia as persausive as it stands, this is based on expositions that mentioned above. youing people to day have many skills due to their communication with many people. furthermore, development of technology help them a lot to be familiarv with many types of career any selectb which on better for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...art device and presence of internet. It become easily for every person to seek about t...
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Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kids
...y for every person to seek about truth. kids can search by using these devices ton ...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devices'' or 'device's'?
Suggestion: devices'; device's
...t truth. kids can search by using these devices ton figure out any thing in this life....
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... kids can search by using these devices ton figure out any thing in this life. T...
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Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... by using these devices ton figure out any thing in this life. This is example from my r...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ife. This is example from my real life. when mu son in high school. I ask him which ...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ife. This is example from my real life. when mu son in high school. I ask him which ...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'answers'.
Suggestion: answers
...e want to study when attend collage. He answer me, He did a lot of searching in Google...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., He did a lot of searching in Google to know which type of study make him find g...
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Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...ood career in the future. In the en, he decide to study siber security, He mentions, a...
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Suggestion: As
...e for him ton find his drem future job. as you can see with thevadvance of technol...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can take their decision independently. Second, today, our kids are more respons...
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Suggestion: Theyb
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: This
...w many people from playing vedio games. this help them to abroad trheir horizon and ...
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
... which help them to take their decision with out dependingb on any person, just take adv...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youing
...ed on expositions that mentioned above. youing people to day have many skills due to t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...o their communication with many people. furthermore, development of technology help them a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68041237113 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49661796957 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518041237113 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6425898823 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9565217391 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441823843583 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128454728627 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17322539071 0.0737576698707 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256914783225 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205144244492 0.0645574589148 318% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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