The human civilization led to multiple devastating effects on the earth. Many of natural resources have been declined to a considerable extent. Some of them are the animals, the forests, and the clean water. Personally, I believe that forests are the most important resource that needs to be saved. I feel this way for the following reasons.
To begin with, forests play an extremely essential role in preserving other resources. They provide a shelter for a large number of animals around the globe. The small animals feed on vegetation that grows in the forests and these animals themselves considered as a nutritional resource for the larger animals, thus, the forest participate in the stability of the food chain. Moreover, trees tend to attract the rainy clouds, so, they maintain a continuous source of fresh water. that make the nearby area more suitable for cultivation. On the other hand, deforestation leads to noticeable disturbance of the ecosystem. For instance, as a result of the expansion of the industrial field in my country, many of the forests have been removed in order to build new factories. That action led to many adverse effects like drought and soil erosions. In addition, many of the animals and birds lost their natural habitat. This briefly emphasis how can the forests protect other natural resources on our planet.
Furthermore, forests can control some of the environmental problems. In contrary to other creatures, plants inhale carbon dioxide and omit the oxygen into the atmosphere as part of their respiration process. Thus, they participate in decreasing the air pollution. Since carbon dioxide absorbs the heat that reflected from the surface of the earth, is considered as one of the different causes that lead to global warming which is, nowadays, the most concerning issue around the world. For example, the factories that have been built in my country led to a huge level of air pollution and the temperature have been raised to a degree that was intolerable for most of the citizens at those areas. As a result, most of them left their places and move to other ones.
In conclusion, forests proved to be a key factor that conserves the other earth’s resources. They provide a suitable living environment for both human being and animals. Thus, governments should encourage afforestation of their countries and state radical punishments for deforestation actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1679389313 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83880758076 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544529262087 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5873659842 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.625 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135986264559 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411560176018 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556337927307 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100679623157 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076548867311 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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