Although animals are beautiful creature of God which plays vital role in natural habitat. Some people keeps the pets at home and built close relations with the and treat the as family member while other don't like the pets at their homes. Personally I believes that the close relation with pets is not good the reasons for my propensity are as follows.
The very first reason the close relations with pet is not suitable because they harm to human beings more than benefit.The dog is most famous pet nowadays in our houses Its a very loyal to his master among the other pets he gives company to people who lives alone but his major side effects which is so fatal for example dogs carries a deadly disease called rabies when they bite human beings if its not vaccinated its may cause death specially for little kids who plays with dogs. Similarly other birds also carries disease such as flu and allergies to humans. Considering these harmful aspects of animals I disagrees with the statement that close relations with pets is good for people.
Moreover, close relations with animals reduce the human efficacy to become a social person. Many people who have pets at home they spend much of their time with them and they hardly contact with people lives around them. For instance I notice many people around my community who work at day time when they returns home they have no time to see their families and friends because they have to take care of their pets and also also they can't go for long vacations because they of pets who stayed home such as birds which is easy for them to carry with them. So pets such as dogs and birds are big obstruction for people to attend the public events and social activities.
By way of conclusion, although the pets are good companion of human beings buts it's disadvantages are more than benefits. Pets cause some incurable deadly disease along with they makes the people less sociable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although animals are beautiful creature of God w...
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... people keeps the pets at home and built close relations with the and treat the ...
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...e the pets at their homes. Personally I believes that the close relation with pets is no...
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... harm to human beings more than benefit.The dog is most famous pet nowadays in our ...
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... most famous pet nowadays in our houses Its a very loyal to his master among the ot...
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...loyal to his master among the other pets he gives company to people who lives alo...
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...ly for little kids who plays with dogs. Similarly other birds also carries disease such a...
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...d allergies to humans. Considering these harmful aspects of animals I disagrees ...
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...elations with pets is good for people. Moreover, close relations with an...
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...I notice many people around my community who work at day time when they returns h...
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...mmunity who work at day time when they returns home they have no time to see their fam...
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...hey have to take care of their pets and also also they cant go for long vacations because...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e care of their pets and also also they cant go for long vacations because they of p...
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...e public events and social activities. By way of conclusion, although the...
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Suggestion: make
...ncurable deadly disease along with they makes the people less sociable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68529411765 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16343272982 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.924803708 48.9658058833 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.75 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193254272031 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870432154143 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504324010834 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126983378633 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482214077076 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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