Many people say that the Internet is the most important invention ever. Do you agree or disagree with this and if not, what do you believe to be more important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Some people may say that the Internet is the most important invention ever. This is a statement which I disagree with entirely as I believe there are other inventions that have undeniably impacted humanity over aspects such as technology, health and social development. I can mention three inventions that, I believe, are more important: vaccines electricity and computers.
Vaccines have had a deep impact in both human and animal life as they have helped to eradicate diseases and stop epidemics and pandemics. A couple of centuries ago, epidemics used to kill many people, decreasing the population in many places of the world when they struck; such were the cases of epidemics of the Spanish Flu and the Bubonic Pest. Even a few decades ago, people would suffer from physical life lasting disabilities from Polio.
Another invention that I defend as more important than the invention of the Internet, is the electricity. From the moment humanity managed to control electricity, every aspect of human life has changed: people can work at night as well as during the day; there have been great advances in technology and pretty much everything we use every day of our lives depends on electricity.
The third more important invention -in my humble opinion- than the internet is the computer. With the aid of computers problems can be solved faster than they could before. In fact, I believe humanity would not have been able to go to the moon without the help of computers. Also, kids are taught how to use computers from early age because humanity has become aware that computers will continue to be an essential part of people´s lives.
Measured by the importance of the inventions I have described above, vaccines, electricity and computers are far more important inventions than Internet. In my opinion, they have had and continue to have a greater impact either in the quality and expectancy of life or in the technological and overall development than Internet could ever have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, third, well, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0696969697 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75837650712 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8386994494 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222397562513 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961682845387 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891415070582 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134115954118 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651141802348 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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