Many Students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
Many students live away from the home for their school, college, or even for the job. While living far away from home we need someone who is always there for us as a family, in my opinion, the roommate is the person who gives a vibe like a family. In my point of view, a good roommate needs these three qualities 1. Caring Person 2. Compatible 3. Loyal. I feel this way for some specific reasons which are as follows.
First of all, why a good roommate needs to be a caring person because if the person is careless about himself and towards others then it will create a problem. I want to explain this with my own example, when I was pursuing my degree I had my senior as a roommate, in starting days of college she seems good and helpful but one day I fall sick and I was not able to get out of my bed and cook for myself. I asked her to make soup but she ignores me and left the room. At that time, she behaves very rudely with me. So, I think being a caring person is very important as a roommate
Second thing is that being compatible is an important quality because it is not important that every student in college or school belongs to the same culture. Sometimes two different people meet from two different continents. It is important to understand each other culture and support them. For instance, food choices, culture, and tradition. Some people really misbehaved with the person who does not belong to their culture and treats them badly. And it may make you feel alone when you already live away from your family and affects your mental health.
The third quality is loyalty, and the reason is you shared all of the things with your roommate. Like all your personal stuff. Here it is very important that a person needs to loyal to you. Do not touch your personal things in your absences, for example, this is a real incident that happened to me when I was in college. We are three girls in one room. In few days I started to notice that someone stealing money from my pocket. One day it becomes the worst when someone steals three thousand rupees from my pocket. And then I found that she was my roommate, I trusted her but she broke my trust. At that time, I realized how important is this to have a good loyal roommate.
In conclusion, I feel that there are three important qualities of a good roommate.
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- Many Students have to live with roommates while going to school or university What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important 70
- Many Students have to live with roommates while going to school or university What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: 'He' in subjunctive clause must be used base form of the verb: 'steal'.
Suggestion: steal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, third, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35944700461 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28140388131 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.6297459913 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.68 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.36 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231295991411 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611966982841 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073332541358 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149604630712 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500453952877 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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