Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
There are both positive and negative aspects associated with the life that modern transport facilities provided us. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement that modern transportation made our world a better place to live in. I feel this way for many reasons which I will explore further in this essay.
To begin with, in today's world, one of the major reasons for an increase in environmental pollution is vehicular emissions. Specifically, air pollution increased in the past few years to a greater extent than ever before mainly due to the harmful gases that modern vehicles emit. For instance, recent research says that people who use petrol vehicles often are more vulnerable to respiratory diseases. My personal experience is a compelling example that supports this research. I still vividly remember how my brother suffered due to breathing difficulties after traveling using his vehicle for travel continuously for three years. Thus I feel that modern transport brings greater harm to human health.
Secondly, Modern vehicles also affect marine health and groundwater quality. Especially, large ships that carry petrol containers from one place to another cause greater harm. For instance, the recent news about the leakage of crude oil in the sea from the cargo ships that are on the Bay of Bengal led to the death of about 50 different fish species. Moreover, the intrusion of this polluted seawater with the pure water below the ground made the water undrinkable for the people around that place. Hence, instead of making the place better, modern transport made the situation close to that coast worse.
Thirdly, Humans are becoming lazy because of the transport facilities. We started to avoid walking even to nearby places, instead we prefer to go by bike. This not only harms the environment but also health. For example, I've seen my neighbor suffering from diabetics due to his lack of physical exercise. He used to go to work by walking about 10 years back but after the vehicles start to come to the markets, he bought one and the problem starts then. As he started to use it extensively, his physical exercise started to decrease drastically. Accordingly, vehicles make humans lazy.
Thus, I strongly believe that modern transportation makes the world a bad place to live by bringing pollution in their necessities such as water, air. Also, it brings a lot of diseases that further make life harder.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...or travel continuously for three years. Thus I feel that modern transport brings gre...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...vironment but also health. For example, Ive seen my neighbor suffering from diabeti...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67169889771 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.568345004 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5217391304 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296490556274 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809392871095 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12847819222 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182853024343 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12143948185 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...or travel continuously for three years. Thus I feel that modern transport brings gre...
^^^^
Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...vironment but also health. For example, Ive seen my neighbor suffering from diabeti...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67169889771 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.568345004 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5217391304 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296490556274 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809392871095 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12847819222 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182853024343 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12143948185 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.