Most experiences in life that seemed difficult at the time became valuable lessons for the future. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The Albert Einstein once said: "The only source of knowledge comes from experiences." I strongly agree with this statement, because as long as we live the life is going to teach us lessons. Some of them are going to be easier than the others. This essay is going to elaborate the idea of learning from past experiences.
Most of the people had few hard phases in their lives. Going through them did not make them weak or fragile; therefore, it made them even stronger. My mother is a compelling example of this. She had a hard childhood, where she had to take care of animals which her family owned. My mom had to do all the house choirs since her parents were not capable of doing so. As this was not enough for her, she had also seen the devastating impact of war on her hometown and her close friends and family. However, even though my mother had been through a lot in her life, she is a supermom with a positive spirit and educational life lessons.
Moreover, not all lessons come from the other people's past. After all, we have to experience some things by ourselves. The life is going to put us through challenging situations, whether we want it or not. Consider the first great love and the heartbreak for an instance. While we are so crazy in love, we are unable to see all the consequences of our infatuation. I had personally experienced the strength of this and the heartbreak was unavoidable. Due to this, today I am careful and sustained in expressing my emotional side. To further explain, by experiencing something by your own, you gain a dose of caution and awareness of your wellbeing.
To put it briefly, whether we like it or not, the life is going to challenge us and it is up to us to use this as lessons for our better future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... to elaborate the idea of learning from past experiences. Most of the people had few hard pha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51401869159 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67908063423 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8658515642 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2631578947 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159224895375 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444738619294 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329878566657 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968302966104 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113379465257 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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