The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Do you agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that we all need a well-paid job to flourish in our everyday lives and this concept play a dominant role in individuals' way of living throughout history. Stemming from this fact a relevant question that is a moot point is whether people should just take their incomes into consideration when it comes to career and make a living. Due to controversial nature of this question there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that there are many factors such as relationship, happiness, security and so forth, without which a career seems to be hilarious. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, there is no doubt that human beings have always been looking for success along with trials and tribulations in their lives. Generally phrased, success is one of utmost important life goals for every person that bend over backwards to achieve. Although human beings put all their efforts to find a well-paid job, enjoy from what people do and make a plan for future should be first priority. For instance, successful always have had plan for their future and not to do something without any goal and plan. As a matter of fact, if people do not have plans for their future, not only will they run into a huge and serious problem but also will be overwhelmed by stress. To elucidate more on this issue, jobs and careers provide fertile ground for people to be successful in their personal life and patronize them make a right and sound decision in critical situation in order to investigate ways of success.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that jobs will provide an opportunity for individuals to enhance their relationship and social communication. To put it in other word, vast majorities of people are in rush coming in and coming out whether in a big corporation or a small office. In such case, people have great chance to interact with them and develop their social skills. Going into the depth, with job and career people will learn how to behave and how to interact with others and make a long lasting relation. However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, the most important aspect of working is make money owing to the fact that too many countries have had serious problem with inflation and economic recession for centuries. In this case, people need a hoard of money in order to flourish and progress in their lives. Nevertheless, it does not make those proceeding advantages pale.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that there are significant factors such as happiness success, relationship and so forth, which people should look for through their jobs and careers. Indeed, a job can provide an opportunity for people to reach success and pinnacle of their life. In addition, people will have great chance in order to improve their social skills and personality.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-24 | Nurmira | 70 | view |
| 2020-01-23 | Harutyun Aslanyan | 60 | view |
| 2020-01-21 | Nurmira | 70 | view |
| 2020-01-18 | farzaddanaei | 70 | view |
| 2020-01-18 | farzaddanaei | 70 | view |
- Some item can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer? 76
- It is better to be a member of a group than to be a leader of a group. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 70
- In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to secure, successful future. Do you agree or disagree? 90
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement 66
- The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 563, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ion. However, what was alluded to above cant be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve their social skills and personality.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2549.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90192307692 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69717622995 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501923076923 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6695971859 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.863636364 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22727272727 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101349676455 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309671097692 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330512580411 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608918652935 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257555808467 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.