The most important characteristic of a successful political leader is good communication skill.
Nowadays, numerous political leaders are impressive due to their achievements. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement that the most important characteristic of a successful political leader is good communication skill, because more properties they have to own to become successful leaders.
First of all, successful leaders have to be humanitarian to help the society and even the world. once they completely assist some people who are really needed for help, they could be remembered and admired by people thoroughly and become successful leaders. For example, Barack Obama is a successful political leader, in that he had built multiple charities to help people all over the world who are suffering from poverty. Especially poor people in Africa, they cannot subsist their lives due to the shortage of available water and the deficiency of crops caused by severe climate . he donated a large quantities of wealth to the organization to subsidize people to earn their subsistence. In this way, people living in terrible circumstances obtain much more opportunities to acquire adequate foods and solve the fundamental subsistence problems. Moreover, he published the regulation to help children to attain better education, which considerably enhanced the education level in America to guarantee every child to accept high-quality education. Consequently, once a political leader is humanitarian to help people, he or she would be succeed.
Furthermore, successful leaders also must support the equity of people and protect the world. A leader cannot only focus on political problems inside a country. Instead, he or she must concentrate on resolving any inimical problems or unbalanced conflicts to defend the peaceful environment. For instance, Mandala is also a successful leader, though he was jailed in prison for an abiding period about half of his life. he utilized multiple decades to dedicated to the enterprise of releasing freedom of the blacks and he insisted the equity of people. Although he sometimes were repressed by the government and criticized by enormous people all over the world. due to he insistence on the struggle and the freedom of the blacks, the blacks received their license at last. At the same time, his achievements were remembered by a myriad of people and spread throughout the world until now. Hence, a successful political leader also has to dedicate on replicating discrimination all over the world.
In conclusion, the most important characteristic of a successful political leader is not good communication skills, but other features such as being humanitarian insistence on equity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44390243902 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1101001193 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539024390244 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6482975675 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324328352326 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103597586242 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151620316843 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312725981408 0.150856017488 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205668979104 0.0645574589148 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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