The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees.
The successful companies often depend on well-trained employees because these outstanding staffs can make most profit to companies in many ways. This shows that the value about improving the efficiency and proficiency of its employees.
First of all, the companies highly focus on raising profit and improving the proficiency of its employees can realize company’s goal. For instance, many famous companies will send their brilliant worker s to study aboard. While these workers finished the study, they could apply the theories learned from school. That is, they can develop more strategies through the knowledge they have studied, and it can help companies gain much more revenue.
In addition, efficiency is the key to become successful companies. Take my own experience for example. Our company standardizes the process of work and it can help employees be more efficient by following the steps . Due to the steps , our staff can deal with problems more quickly. Consequently, the improvement not only simplified the procedure but also boosted sales revenue. Thus, the efficiency of employees relates to the number of clients and it is a big deal to companies.
Admittedly, the facilities also play a significant role in the successful enterprises . To be more specific, nowadays, the advanced device can build the databases and gain more customers for the corporation. However, the abilities of employees outweigh the advanced facilities. Because of the reason that only the well-trained workers can set in the best performance of the advanced device. As a result, without the well- trained employees, the efficiency of facilities may decline.
In conclusion, the efficiency and proficiency of employees in big companies are irreplaceable. In turn, the advanced device or huge property do not outweigh the well-trained employees. Therefore, companies should concentrate on improving the abilities of its employees.
- There are many kinds of energy sources that we are using. However, people should use cleaner energy such as the wind or water power to produce electricity instead of traditional energy such as coal and oil. 76
- The most important investment for a big company is to improve the efficiency and proficiency of its employees. 70
- People should buy things made in their own country even if the price is higher than the same things made elsewhere 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following the statement Being creative rather than planning carefully helps people come up with the best solution a problem 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60135135135 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08901216808 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7990309896 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316964915285 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987002487776 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102034261473 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203812470054 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105550489205 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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