The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment.
In order to better serve its people, the government should always attach importance to the healthcare which is one of the crucial factors for a happy life. Since the government’s financial budget is limited, some people suggest putting the majority of the money to clean the environment so that more people can stay away from diseases. According to my perspective, although the cleaning of pollutants is necessary, there are others aspects should be taken into consideration, too.
First of all, the harsh environmental conditions in some areas should be improved without any delay for a better effect of health care. People will definitely be unhealthy living in the bad environment. Air pollution, underwater contamination, deforestation, and acidic rain are all serious environmental problems that cannot be ignored now. In Beijing, for instance, people have to wear thick masks in winter if they want to hang out because of the harmful smog. It possible to be ill for citizens in Beijing because they have to bear the air pollution every day. In that case, the local government should give priority to clean the damaged environment.
However, the government should never forget the development of national medical system when it comes to health care. Without sufficient financial aid, the cost of medicine will inevitably increase and people may be reluctant to pay the bill. Thus, some people might not go to the hospital when they feel bad, which reveals the weakness of the healthcare system. On the other hand, the advance of modern medicine will be lagged if it lacks the government complementary. Therefore, the government should pay attention to the medical system to achieve the improvement in health care.
In addition, appropriate guide about how to stay fit and healthy should be given to people. The government cannot care about everyone at every aspect, so the one shoulder the most responsibility for personal health care is himself or herself. Documentary about healthy living as well as diets could be produced by the government and placed on TV for the audience to study. By building more playground, city gardens and exercise fields, the government can provide better places for people to do bodybuilding. The awareness of keeping fit will be stronger and increasing people will care about their physical condition to prevent diseases.
In conclusion, except for the environment cleaning, the government ought to improve the national medical system and conduct health education for people in order to upgrade the health care. By doing these, people will be healthier and happier.
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- 4 Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years Why do you think this has happened Is it a positive or negative development 67
- 13 Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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- It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face Individuals on their own can do little or nothing What is your opinion about this statement 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, except for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.0752688172 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2553699284 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88858153056 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536992840095 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4132192176 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09523809524 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316752976715 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975555969956 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891443958065 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179253490728 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014391765568 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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