Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
In today's world movies are like lifeline of entertainment, everybody wants to be updated with all new movies and blockbusters, because it gives an unmatched experience of viewing a story with hero, villain and sometime even with superheros. Movies star are like God for many of there fans. starting from younger to elders everyone is love movies and i do too love movies.
First, movies are best source of entertainment. There are so many genre of movies are available in market today like horror, romantic, sci-fi, thriller, etc. in short everybody finds something they like in this entertainment industry. In addition to that not movies are not just story it can be seen as a journey of people who act in the movie, along with all drama, thriller, action and specially songs and dance steps. so it is obviously very famous all over the world. Nevertheless with tight work schedules in weekdays people search of good ways to spend there weekend, planning a trip or weekend activities are not always possible, In such scenarios movies comes handy to spend a time with friends and family and have good experience.
Second, movies also act as the mirror so the society.Movies are basically fictions written by the writers and writer tells that bad characteristics and bad and which are good, what should be appreciated and what should not be appreciated. Specially in Bollywood movies that ends with happy ending and personally i like that. Furthermore not all movies not only fictions, today there are so many directors and producers who are make movies on real life story, and we get to know about such real life stories.
Lastly, movies contributes to economy of the nation. In country like India there are like on an average atleast 4 movies been released every week even though some are flop and some are success, still this industry gives employments to millions of the people in the world. This is also because movies are so popular and are so much in demand.
In conclusion, with the entertainment the industry is providing for all groups of people so movies are immensely famous in all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91388888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6711406335 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5448959353 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288711570668 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111140225755 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674494854616 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183884782199 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280591474493 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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