my way of life versus my parents
My way of life versus my parents way of life? Now there are some people who would want the coming generations to have lifestyle similar to our parents while there are others who would want them to have lifestyle similar to ours. I personally prefer our parents way of life.
Now obviously people opting for our way of life have there own valid reasons. It is true that we today have many more kinds of entertainment facilities available. There are various kinds of professions which we can now opt for. But despite of all this I still feel life of parents was better.
Firstly, there was much less competition in every field then. Be it getting into a good college or securing a good job everything has become much more difficult than it previously was. The main reason for this is population increase. Today the population has increased many folds but the number of good colleges and job opportunities have not increased to that extent. This has inturn resulted in more stress in today's generation and that too at a very early stage in life.
Second reason why I feel that our parents way of life was better is because of less exposure to technology. Because of these advent in technology children today have never experienced what it is to go outside and play physical sports. This in turn is making them fat which can lead to many health issues in there future. Today even small children have accounts on instagram , snapchat and tiktok. And they spend majority of there time on these.
Thus, I prefer our parents way of life because it allowed our parents to be both mentally and physically fit. So because of all these reasons I feel the future generations should have the life which is more inspired by our parents way of life. For this I feel the government should build more advanced colleges and provide more job opportnities so that there is less stress among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, then, thus, while, i feel, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6656626506 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46283231676 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7866047694 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.45 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297528631625 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105852491423 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210560330629 0.0737576698707 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172923940549 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15965148029 0.0645574589148 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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