n the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
It is an obvious fact than children will grow up and get independent eventually. Although people are on the same page when it
comes to the importance of independentcy for their children whether new generatins are more independent is still a matter of
discussion. Although controversial, I personally believe that the young generation in the modern world are inheretly more
independent than those who lived in a less complicated world. Among various reasons, the suitable environment for
independentcy because of the development of the technologies and forcing conditions that nowadays exist are adressed below
as two main reasons. (20)
As my first and foremost reason I would like to mention how technology changed our lives in compare to two ore three
generation before. Nowadays, young people have access to the internet which allows them to work and make money despite
their age. For instance, influncers on social media, programmers or artists that work as a freelancer can work via internet wihout
even getting out of home or quiting school. While on the other hand, people should do labor work like farming. As a result, they
were forced to work outside and on specefic time during the day which usaully did not allow them to continue their studies.
These changes allow young people to get economically independent from their parents so they can decide for themselves
without being forced by parents to do something else.
Another reason supporting my view is that the new lifstyle made young people to become independent sooner. To give you an
example of what I mean, students, these days, usaully apply for colleges that are in different cities from their hometown which
require suficient amount of independentcy to be able to live on you own. Regarding this fact, parents also help their children in
this path so they be more sucsessful in their futur life. Another example of the effects of modern societies is that governments
usaully provide economical aids for eighteen years olds so they can leave their parents house and start their life as a
independent indivisaul because. Considering all these we can see how it is defferent now that it was before where children used
to continue their life working the same job as their parents and living in the same hous that they were grown in which all of
these restricted their ability to decide for themselves because their life was closely dependent on their parents'.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: ONE_ORE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'or'?
Suggestion: or
...ogy changed our lives in compare to two ore three generation before. Nowadays, you...
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Line 18, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r parents house and start their life as a independent indivisaul because. Consid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, still, while, for instance, i mean, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09900990099 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69763372658 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55198019802 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5664548378 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9333333333 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286546301312 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938341659604 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690588655604 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802723223096 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620605321178 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.