Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbors are an important part of our lives. As we live in a neighborhood, we are forced to interfere with its habitats. Having good neighbors is a very fabulous thing. Personally, I believe that a good neighbor is a respectful and helpful one. The rationale behind my idea will be elaborated in the next few words.
First, a respectful neighbor is one of the best things you could ever have. Respect is fundamental in our relationships. Respectful neighbors will always try to be quiet and keep the building clean. However, There are some neighbors that make a lot of noise daily, and this is hard to be controlled. Having a lot of noise around can make our lives catastrophic, especially if we have to study for exams. For example, last year I had very annoying neighbors. It was a family of seven children just above our apartment. Their children were shouting and crying all the time. Although we tried to talk to them a lot, we couldn’t get any positive results. Unfortunately, I had some hard exams and I was obliged to go to the library daily. Consequently, I had to change the apartment I liked just to get rid of the annoying neighbors.
Second, helpful and kind neighbors are also one of the types I would like to have. During our daily lives, we often need some help from our neighbors. Sometimes it is very hard for us to buy everything we need to use. So, We tend to borrow stuff that we don’t use a lot from our neighbors. Also, we may get some precious advice about our decisions. When we face troubles in our houses, we can get help from them as they often have different contacts and experience. For instance, we are four students staying in an old apartment. All of us are not usually living in this city so we don’t know a lot of people here. Last month, water pipes in our apartment broke up and we stayed without any water. We didn’t know what to do or whom to call to fix the problem. Fortunately, we had a very kind neighbor. He called a plumber he knows and explained the system in our apartment. Eventually, the pipes were repaired with a cheap price as he persuaded the plumber to take less than the usual. So, helpfulness is an important quality we wish to have in our neighbors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52475247525 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76781376893 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522277227723 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9559723805 48.9658058833 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9333333333 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4666666667 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106431582881 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368265569976 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453563930352 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097643147003 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046248406615 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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