Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
-someone who is quiet
-someone who we are similar to
-someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbors are the people whom we do not choose to be part of our lives, yet they play the most vital part of it. We almost see them on a daily basis in many different situations and that inevitably creates a relationship that is very unique than any other relationship we face in our lives. There are too many kinds of neighbors that we encounter, the quiet, the supportive and those who we are similar to. If I had ever the chance to choose y neighbors, I will certainly choose the supportive one. I reached this opinion due to many reasons that I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of All, Neighbors, even if they are not the closest to our hearts, they are the nearest to us. They will be the first to knock their doors asking for help if we face an emergency or seek any support. I believe that we will not be comfortable doing so except if we already know that our neighbors are supportive enough and that we can easily break the ice between us. On the other hand, some neighbors are so isolated and quiet that we may not ask for their help even if the house was on fire! Last Christmas, when all my community staff is on vacation, I forgot my keys inside the business center including my apartment, car, and business center keys and passes! I needed someone to open me the business center and of course knows me, otherwise, he may speculate if I live with them in the complex or not. The first one came to my mind was our friendly always smiling neighbor on the first floor. In the beginning, I was so shy to disturb him on the holidays, but I didn’t have any choice especially that it was so cold. However, he was super supportive. He made me feel comfortable while asking him and rapidly helped me get my keys. If it was not for my friendly supportive neighbor, I would have stayed in the street.
Secondly, supportive neighbors help in creating a better and safer community. This kind of people are always cooperative and do not mind tackling problems and try to solve it even if it is not touching their lives. Some others are very negative, if the problem is not clearly affecting their lives, they will not move an inch. My personal experience has a great influence on my opinion. 5 years ago, my friend’s building in the apartment complex was infested with roaches. Apart from the idea that roaches scare her, the whole building turned to be so nasty that we stopped visiting her. She tried to raise her voice several times to the leasing office, but they didn’t take any action until she united with 4 of her neighbors and they made a formal claim and raised it to the complex mother company. In a few days, the building was carefully cleaned up and the roaches were eradicated. All of this happened just because they were supportive neighbors to each other which explains why I prefer supportive neighbors to any other type of neighbors.
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- Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?-someone who is quiet-someone who we are similar to-someone who is supportiveUse specific details and examples in your answer. 70
- Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?-someone who is quiet-someone who we are similar to-someone who is supportiveUse specific details and examples in your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... We almost see them on a daily basis in many different situations and that inevitably creates ...
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Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...evitably creates a relationship that is very unique than any other relationship we face in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, kind of, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51335877863 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54088630762 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49427480916 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7058094137 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.826086957 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7826086957 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143552544026 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395808133255 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519420325586 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097934878894 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320139805785 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.