A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? Use specific reasons and details in your response.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...the following essay. First of all, I think this is a good decision because ...
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Suggestion: .
... experience would not have been the same .Also, in general people who speaks Span...
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Suggestion: Also
...xperience would not have been the same .Also, in general people who speaks Spanish ...
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Suggestion:
...not have been the same .Also, in general people who speaks Spanish is very nice ...
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... people who speaks Spanish is very nice and kind with foreign people. Secon...
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...e I needed the language in order to knew the history involved on the exhibitions....
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Suggestion:
...ry involved on the exhibitions. Besides, I know many places in my country that ar...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'visits'.
Suggestion: visits
...el Paine, and I am sure that if someone visit these places without knowing the native...
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Suggestion:
...ces without knowing the native language, it will be more difficult. That&ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in general, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51768488746 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42506836312 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508038585209 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6135142877 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 5.45110844103 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152325858128 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716265884323 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711770081824 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112370150468 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541932709671 0.0645574589148 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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