A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? Use specific reasons and details in your response.
Studying Spanish, my native language, is an excellent idea for several reasons. Here I will explain some: is part of an important family of languages, is used in very interesting countries and it has been a remarcable source of good Literature.
First, Spanish is a “romace” tongue, what it means that is a language derived from Latin. It belongs to the same family that English, French, German and Italian, do. If you learn Spanish, you may have and important advantage to study any of its relative tongues, and they are very important and useful idioms. Besides, there are plenty of beautiful words in Spanish, often with an origin in Latin, but also derived from Arabian and Greek languages.
Spanish is the language that is talked in many interesting countries in Latin America, for instance, Chile, Argentina, Uruguay and Mexico. With the help of Spanish you can also visit Spain, one ofe the more wonderful lands in Europe. The mentioned countries have world class Universities, many jobs oportunities if you want to spend a season there, and also beatifull landscapes and locations if you want to visit them on vacation.
Moreover, Spanish is a really good option to learn if you are into Literature. Many of the Master Peace were originally writed in Spanish. In my opinion, there are a wide variety of authors, in all the ages, who are created with the spanish words: Miguel de Cervantes y Saavedra wrote “El Ingenioso Hidalgo Don Quijote de La Mancha”; Calderón de la Barca produced the marvelous theatre peace named “La Vida es Sueño”; Jorge Mánriquez gived us the “Coplas por la Muerte de mi padre”; Gabriel García Márquez became worldwide famous with his “Cien Años de Soledad”, and Julio Cortázar did the same with “Rayuela”. And I am just naming a few examples.
I strongly recommend to everyone to learn Spanish. You definitely won´t regret on that idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...good Literature. First, Spanish is a 'romace' tongue, what it mean...
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Line 17, column 56, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...mmend to everyone to learn Spanish. You definitely won't regret on that idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19242902208 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02079093619 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621451104101 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 116.109412002 48.9658058833 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0540100581925 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245813122859 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304308024562 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396473410638 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245554020989 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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