comics

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'originated'.
Suggestion: originated
... as an American art or if it was really originate from America.

^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1673, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
... like England or Hungary. After this he mention  about Action comic, the character...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1822, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Ten
...comic book and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1831, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...k and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book cre...
^^
Line 1, column 1913, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adds'.
Suggestion: adds
...ated 60 years before Super man, also he add the nationality of the creator of Super...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2683.0 1373.03311258 195% => OK
No of words: 333.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 8.05705705706 5.08290768461 159% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.5489182418 2.5805825403 409% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432432432432 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 419.366225166 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.55342163355 135% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 21.2450331126 391% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 592.022592474 49.2860985944 1201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 670.75 110.228320801 609% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.25 21.698381199 384% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06452816374 318% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140700140012 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14521196118 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640015375959 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140700140012 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 58.2 13.3589403974 436% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -55.07 53.8541721854 -102% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 23.7 5.55761589404 426% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.6 11.0289183223 377% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 30.65 12.2367328918 250% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.42419426049 130% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 75.0 10.7273730684 699% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.498013245 335% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.2008830022 277% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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