COMICS
The author of the reading believes that the comic medium is a unique american art form, because he explain that a lot of comic and comics strip in the world were a American origins. Some examples of this were Hogan Alley comic strips, action comic about superman and the Asian comic called manga.
First of all the professor in the audio explain that the writer was wrong about some points in the lecture. Is it mentioned that the comic strips of Hogan Alley was about inmingrants who went to America for a better life and tell the history of that perspective.
Secondly, the author contends that action comics like superman were American popular comics and has fame for being only American, but the real author of this comics was Canadian. Super was published in America several years after Tin Tin and others popular comic strips of Europe in 80`s and 90`.
Finally, the professor states that strips comic about smurf has a purest European style, in the case of Japanese comic called manga most of experts thinks was inspired mostly in the ancient Asian art and not in american comic like the writer claims, Disney character depends of the continent for the style and the author.
In conclusion, the lecture and the reading are both about a investigation about the comic medium, the evolution in the history, the difentes style in the world and the lecture claims is not a unique americna art form. The comic is an art that belong to the world in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'explains'.
Suggestion: explains
... a unique american art form, because he explain that a lot of comic and comics strip in...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun comic seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of comics'.
Suggestion: a lot of comics
...rican art form, because he explain that a lot of comic and comics strip in the world were a Am...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...omic and comics strip in the world were a American origins. Some examples of this...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'origin'?
Suggestion: origin
...mics strip in the world were a American origins. Some examples of this were Hogan Alley...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...g only American, but the real author of this comics was Canadian. Super was publishe...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Tin
...ublished in America several years after Tin Tin and others popular comic strips of Euro...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tates that strips comic about smurf has a purest European style, in the case of J...
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the experts') or simply say ''most experts''.
Suggestion: most of the experts; most experts
...the case of Japanese comic called manga most of experts thinks was inspired mostly in the ancie...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... lecture and the reading are both about a investigation about the comic medium, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78125 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2688016523 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0925331316 49.2860985944 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06452816374 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532761330531 0.272083759551 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273943241612 0.0996497079465 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156418909495 0.0662205650399 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334116499817 0.162205337803 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154861226478 0.0443174109184 349% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.