new factories
Some people think that building new factory in our town will benefit the community. Those people think that new factory in our town will bring new job to the area, and also rejuvenate our community. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that building new factory in our community will have many disadvantages. The basis of my opinion is environmental, social and personal.
First from the environmental perspective, we live in clean, beautiful town if we decided to build new factory in our town, every thing in our community will destroyed, for instance, factories cause smog, the air we breathe will become dirty. Factories pollute rivers and streams, the water we drink is going to be polluted, and even the green trees will die because of the factory’s pollution.
Second, from the social view, we live in a small town every one know each other. We live like a big family. Our town is so quite and beautiful. If a new factory builds in our town, new people arrive to our area, people want to build new homes, moreover, and the street will be over crowded too much traffic will be there in our town. The disadvantages of building new factory is outweighed the advantages, fast growth can cause more harm than good.
Third, personally, the new factory will change our town a lot. Our town is safe and pleasant. Every body knows every body. For example, my kids usually play on the front yard with their bikes, if a new factory build, I will never fell that it is safe for my kids to play by themselves. The traffic will cause a lot of noise and danger. We will lose the quite life style of our community. New stranger people will arrive to our community.
In conclusion, for the reason I stated, building new factory has positive effect, but its negative effect are more. Building new factories cause pollution, disturb the quite life style of our community also danger on our health and safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'destroy'
Suggestion: destroy
...town, every thing in our community will destroyed, for instance, factories cause smog, t...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yed, for instance, factories cause smog, the air we breathe will become dirty. Fa...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...danger on our health and safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56871636262 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4384359471 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8095238095 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399050979125 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153396546349 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14174172131 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304903494017 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476988276614 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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