no one should expect to have privacy in internet age
issue
1) rights of individual
2) national secret
3) benefits of information
There have been pros and cons regarding the argument that no one should expect to have privacy in internet age.While both sides may have their own reasons to support their arguments, I totally disagree with this statement with several reasons and examples as follows.To start with, expecting to have privacy in internet age for to take benefits of information is a great way for us to broaden perspectives on the real world.This is attributed to the fact that it offers opportunities for people to become growing into adulthood and building a strong character.Over the decades, today’s rat-race society has been evolving and changing at a surprising speed with such a hectic lifestyle.Therefore, people are hard-pressed for time and feel depressed or drained by the increasing amount of work.However, in this respect, many of us would like to expand and widen their intellectual horizons by expecting to have privacy in internet age for to take benefits of information, which makes them think differently about multiple things.
This is because it allows us to look outside the box and approach things in a different way.
Second, expecting to have privacy in internet age for to keep rights of individual and national secret is a great way for us to learn important life lessons on the real world.
This is attributed to the fact that it offers opportunities for people to become growing into adulthood and building a strong character.
Over the decades, today's rat-raced society has been evolving and changing at a surprising speed with such a hectic lifestyle.
Therefore, people are hard-pressed for time and feel depressed or drained by the increasing amount of work.
As a result, we are still immature and have a long way to go when we are grown up.
During this long journey, we are prone to make mistakes and sometimes tend to misbehave.
However, in this respect, many of us get a lot of life lessons and enrich our spirit by expecting to have privacy in internet age for to keep rights of individual and national secret.
This is because it allows us to get to move on with the real value that we cannot learn from textbooks.
Therefore, we are able to experience something special and it will have a great impact on our lives.
Thus, this proves that expecting to have privacy in internet age is necessary for Our society.
All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07211538462 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99276432644 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456730769231 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 246.668380505 48.9658058833 504% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.307692308 100.406767564 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22365608697 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693564750757 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925951470224 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693564750757 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925951470224 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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