A short, type written, couple of paragraphs, about the artist you want to write your analysis paper on. Why do you think this artist/artwork is important?
To start with, my analysis introduce why I select this picture and what do you think about this photography. I think that I didn't live in this age and didn't go through this period but photographs and other works of art, one can imagine how much people suffered during this period, including the pain, sadness, and suffering from poverty, as they indirectly experienced the past because I believe that the present can be seen in the past, and we are aware that these times can be repeated during the development of our society in the future But I cannot expect this tragedy should be repeated so, we need to have more interest with poverty problems.
Also, I was analyzed with color, shape, line, movement, use of light and dark, It appears that this peace color is black and white but it appears a little red , this photograph show one people on the bed and he look like poor and the bed is made by wine container and blanket and wood board , wood walls and the brick walls are mainly made up of straight lines, two wine containers are shape by circle, man Lie down on the bed but he usually looks front and photograph color usually show night light because It is basically a black-and-white photograph.
- Imagine you work for a company that has money in its budget to help its employees improve their work.1)To improve the quality of technology (computers and printers) that employee use.2)To redesign the offices to comfortable space for employees to work and 66
- The news media is a reliable source of unbiased information 60
- no one should expect to have privacy in internet ageissue1) rights of individual2) national secret3) benefits of information 73
- working at a large company has more benefits than working at a small company. 60
- Essay topics: No one should expect to have privacy in the internet age. issue 1)rights of individual 2) national secret 3) benefits of information 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... about this photography. I think that I didnt live in this age and didnt go through t...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...think that I didnt live in this age and didnt go through this period but photographs ...
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Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...other works of art, one can imagine how much people suffered during this period, inc...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ck and white but it appears a little red , this photograph show one people on the ...
^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'looks'.
Suggestion: looks
...graph show one people on the bed and he look like poor and the bed is made by wine c...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ine container and blanket and wood board , wood walls and the brick walls are main...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 216.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58796296296 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43674716015 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.554270512 48.9658058833 422% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 330.333333333 100.406767564 329% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.6045352989 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 5.45110844103 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108020409681 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114755239126 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113856699117 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078990747225 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060378840779 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 11.7677419355 308% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.32 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.1575268817 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.53 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.