Which of the reasons is most important in helping students to study in colleges and universities?
A) Having access to the university to tutors who can provide individual instruction for the students who have difficulty in study.
B) Having the help and encouragement from the family and friends.
C) Having a excellent teachers in high-school who can help the students before the university.
Use your OWN words to illustrate you point. Don't use your memorized examples.
Some people think having access to the university to tutors who can provide individual instruction for the students who have difficulty in study,
while other believe having the help and encouragement from the family and friends or having a excellent teachers in high-school who can help the students before the university.
The three possible choices on the issue may have their own reasons to support their arguments. If I had to choose one, I would strongly agree with having the help and encouragement from the family and friends.
There are several reasons and examples as follows.
To start with, having the help and encouragement from the family and friends is a great way for university (college) students or their family or their frends to build strong relationships with each others.
This is attributed to the fact that it offers opportunities for them to learn how to develop relationships through communicating their thought and connecting to each other's feeling.
Over the decades, today's rat-race society has been evolving and changing at a surprising speed with such a hectic lifestyle.
Therefore, they are hard-pressed for time and feel depressed or drained by the increasing amount of work.
However, in this respect, many of them restore their relationships through getting the help and encouragement thanks to the family and friends
This is because it allows them to talk and share emotion with each other, and then develop social, interpersonal, and communication skills.
Therefore, they can easily socialize with others and become more outgoing or active while taking the help and encouragement through the family and friends.
Thus, this proves having the help and encouragement from the family and friends.
All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34333333333 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89553487671 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0474837661 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.583333333 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336698106984 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11495895811 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164249511643 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128271303396 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173863794007 0.0645574589148 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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