Not every thing we have to learn is mentioned in books.
Not every thing is mentioned in books and we should learn everything as life go through.
Some people think that everything has to be taught in books and by knowing them very completely theh life would be easier.
Although I agree with this idea , I some how do not think everything can or could be taught in books.
For example, I know that skills are not taught through books like swimming and nobody could learn them through books by theory.
Meanwhile, there are some professions that are not learnt by only reading the book. For instance for driving we need to reach certain age and pass certain exams to show our talent to drive carefully in differrent occasions.
In adddition, I can not agree with those people who are always keen of books because I strongly beleive that we need to learn skills too.
In summary, I beleive not only studying can be helpful but also practical skills should be learnt in certain time and place to be perfect.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Some people think that everything has to be taught in books and by knowing them very completely theh life would be easier.
Error: theh Suggestion: them
Sentence: For instance for driving we need to reach certain age and pass certain exams to show our talent to drive carefully in differrent occasions.
Error: differrent Suggestion: different
Sentence: In adddition, I can not agree with those people who are always keen of books because I strongly beleive that we need to learn skills too.
Error: adddition Suggestion: addition
Error: beleive Suggestion: believe
Sentence: In summary, I beleive not only studying can be helpful but also practical skills should be learnt in certain time and place to be perfect.
Error: learnt Suggestion: learn
Error: beleive Suggestion: believe
flaws:
No. of Words: 169 350 //Minimum 250 words wanted. the paragraphs are too short.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 169 350
No. of Characters: 760 1500
No. of Different Words: 98 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.606 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.497 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.256 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.982 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.451 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.923 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.258 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sier. Although I agree with this idea , I some how do not think everything can ...
^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
... Although I agree with this idea , I some how do not think everything can or could be...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.181318681319 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.214285714286 0.158761421928 135% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0549450549451 0.0866891130778 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0879120879121 0.046263068375 190% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0659340659341 0.0685040099705 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0549450549451 0.0351676179071 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34410842127 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.032967032967 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0384615384615 0.0887237588012 43% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.043956043956 0.0209618222197 210% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0164835164835 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 962.0 2387.08602151 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 408.028673835 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65882352941 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.48200974243 81% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205882352941 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123529411765 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0705882352941 0.112833075102 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34410842127 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 212.727598566 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 49.5330047359 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6684587814 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 21.25 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7683112574 48.84282405 45% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.644075263715 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.8382352941 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.02985074627 1.45489161554 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373801578161 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150285057491 0.103427244359 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0758070879569 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.894815920037 0.497263757937 180% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195283015416 0.151897553556 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179581963315 0.114077575197 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139421216505 0.0781384742642 178% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.163180386475 0.336927656856 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0383796847879 0.067059652881 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199399277428 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137966702233 0.0618886996521 223% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.