Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. is it improve people lives?
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Eating is a passion for so many people. Some people believe that cooking food become easier these days. In my opinion, we can cook food faster and more convenient with different applicant for few reasons.
Firstly, women in the past used to cook 3 meals every day for their family but now they can make food fast with things like microwave oven. They can use their time for working outside the house and pursue their dreams. For example, my sister was a housewife, She used to cook cookies and meals for her family, She had a lot of leisure time because she cooked with a microwave. She enjoyed cooking with microwave oven. She could cook meals fast for her children who were so hungry all the time. She wanted to fulfill her life and meet her goal on her job. She hired as bank clerk, because of time she had she could continue her studies too. All of these were possible because of extra time she had from cooking with the microwave oven and a mixer. Comparing her with my mother who had to cook 3 meals every day and have to prepare all of ingredients of food in the traditional way. My sister did not spend a lot of time in the kitchen like my mother at all and she had time to continue her career and studies at the same time.
Secondly, people can prepare healthy food easier than before. For instance, my sister really believe in healthy food. She prefer cooking healthy food with variety of ingredients that have low-calorie and high vitamins. She used her mixer for vegetables and beans and put all of these material into microwaves for 30 minutes. She could do shopping in the same day she is going to cook food. Cooking healthy food with variety of material is a must for her and all her applicants make it possible for her and her family to eat healthy food every day and enjoy being healthy.
In conclusion, cooking easily improves people lives, so women can work outside and continue their study. Healthier food is more reachable for families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 495, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ildren who were so hungry all the time. She wanted to fulfill her life and meet her...
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Line 6, column 556, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... her life and meet her goal on her job. She hired as bank clerk, because of time sh...
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Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...ter really believe in healthy food. She prefer cooking healthy food with variety of in...
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Line 8, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aterial into microwaves for 30 minutes. She could do shopping in the same day she i...
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Line 10, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er food is more reachable for families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22337120189 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5755255457 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8333333333 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171517160273 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847053714978 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150622548406 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197819640558 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178041586785 0.0645574589148 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.