Nowadays, with the invention of the microwave and with the popularity of fast food restaurants, food has become easier to prepare than ever. Do you think microwave ovens and fast food restaurants are beneficial to society? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays people are always busy. Whether they are working too hard or have other significant things going on in their life, many simply can not find the time to prepare their own food. To this problem, one can find widespread solutions such as the microwave or fast food restaurants. Myself, I find consuming fast food or using the microwave on a regular basis a bit problematic.
First, as we all know, fast food usually leads to obesity. that is because we usually do not know how the food is made by the restaurant or what are the components of the dish, which could comprise too much sugar or unhealthy oil. An excellent example for an obese caused by fast food is my older sister, dana. dana worked intensively during her internship at the hospital, and was living only from junk food. she gained 35 pounds in one year!
In addition, eating constantly fast food is simply a waste of money. Sure, one could find a place that is more affordable, but in the end, the aggregate sum is higher than buying your grocery at the supermarket. For instance, my total at the supermarket per week is 20 Euro. this allows me to eat healthy and good for the whole week whereas this sum will be sufficient for barely two visits at the fast food stands.
Last but not least, I find cooking as a fun activity. I strongly believe that people who do not cook are passing the great part of their day. For me it is excellent time to relax and forgot from all my surroundings, and my friend Linda, for example, will agree with me. two years ago she was really depressed. she did not passes the collage entry exams nor she could not find a job. cooking was the one thing that helped her. she told me, that every time she cooked, she was relaxed, and she could think efficiently what to do next with her life.
In conclusion, although I do not think we should all avoid eating fast food for good, for all of the reasons mentioned above, I think that preparing our meals can benefit us in matter of physical and mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...al, and was living only from junk food. she gained 35 pounds in one year! In addit...
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...total at the supermarket per week is 20 Euro. this allows me to eat healthy and good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45257452575 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36173225549 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7325100974 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.15 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259139884149 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748210837077 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744862558776 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149047878841 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668463402165 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.