Nowadays, it is said that government should give financial support to people. However, people often argue about which group the government should give support to. Which of the following groups do you think is the most important for the government to support? Older people who no longer work (eg. those who are more than 70 years old); young families with small children; workers who have recently lost their jobs.
Undoubtedly, financial support plays a significant role in people's daily lives in many of the places where they work or play. Some people think that the government should provide young families with small children and workers who have recently lost their jobs with supporting funds, while others do not believe so. Both sides may have their own reason to support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that the government should help older people who are no longer work. There are several reasons as follows.
First of all, older people older than seventy years old cannot work, so they cannot earn income. It means that without financial supports from the government, they cannot survive. Thus, the government give them some money, at least living expenses for subsistence, with the highest priority. An article in recent newspaper revealed some interesting findings about this. According to the Ministry of Welfare and Health, a majority of older people who are retired from their work responded that they had experience skipping their meals due to financial problems, and even some of them visit charities for begging some food. One of the purposes of the government is to make its citizens live without eating problems. I am not dismissing the importance of helping young families with small children and unemployed workers, but at least, they are able to make some money if they do their best while the older people could not. If the government helps the older people, they can survive without worries about eating, which is the basic requirement for human being.
In addition, helping older people will encourage young people to pay their taxes. Young people are worried about their future. If the government does not help the older people with the tax they are paying, they might think that the government will not be responsible for their livings in the future. It will cause the young people to avoid paying proper taxes. For example, Mihee, one of my friends, used to complain about the government because even though she paid a huge tax to the state government, nothing came back to her. However, she has changed after she knew that her grandparents were given a significant amount of money from the government. Her grandparents who no longer work was able to enjoy their eighties thanks to the financial support from the government. She realized the importance of tax system the government is running and now, she has a positive mind on her taxes, thinking that someday when she is old, the government will help her too. If the government do not use their money for the older, young people might think that their taxes are used for unimportant matters, thus leading to a complaint about the government's policy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
..., thus leading to a complaint about the governments policy.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, at least, even so, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94805194805 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44041451818 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508658008658 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3283613957 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28555567416 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901720436436 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549217138508 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210748247019 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313385775466 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
..., thus leading to a complaint about the governments policy.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, at least, even so, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94805194805 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44041451818 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508658008658 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3283613957 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28555567416 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901720436436 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549217138508 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210748247019 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313385775466 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.