old friend or new friend
Friendship is a very adorable bond one can share. For me, my friends are equivalent in importance to my family. Maybe because I have same friends from years of my childhood. So I believe that keeping older friends forever is important but that doesn't mean we stop making new friends. I will explain this explicitly in the below paragraphs.
To begin with, as I stated I have friends that are from my childhood, this is because we both are living in the same city for years. Anyway, for me old friendship is very precious because I feel that we invested time with them, we shared a bond, and we were with each other in every situation of life. The way we understand each other, and the comfort that she will not judge me, and will help is the next level needed in friendship. We can rely on each other, our parents know a lot about our bond. So if someone is having such precious friendship make them value importance of old friends. Friendships are not based on benefits and selfishness, However, to explain the advantage of having old friends you can trust them blindly, they will always give you the best advice and I am very sure they understand far well us than we do ourselves. To explain this I will use my example, One of my childhood friends, always helped me deciding life. This time when I was planning for the USA, she boosted me a lot to study, and she helped me to find a university. She is the bolster of my life.
To carry on further as I stated that old friends are very important for all trust and understanding parallel it is also important to interact with new people. Allow people to enter your life and see if they are worth being with you, match your vibes, and give them a shot. We never know what God has written for us. Old friends are precious but after a certain time when we shift to the job and higher studies, we interact with new people and get involved with them, and share thoughts so that is also important. Let's take this in a way when I will go to a different city, I will need someone with whom I can spend time, travel to a city, do the shopping, and many more such things. For me doing all such stuff all alone is a task. So in this way, we make our new friends and when we match a vibe, we continue that bond from that time. This way we are allowing people to stay with us longer and we never know if this bond will change from office conversation to deep emotional conversation and that lead to years of a shared bond.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...r friends forever is important but that doesnt mean we stop making new friends. I will...
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Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... our parents know a lot about our bond. So if someone is having such precious friends...
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Line 3, column 928, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to decide' or 'decide'.
Suggestion: to decide; decide
... my childhood friends, always helped me deciding life. This time when I was planning for...
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Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...are thoughts so that is also important. Lets take this in a way when I will go to a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, may, so, well, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29184549356 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35244425972 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450643776824 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5351132457 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200777300156 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717771546999 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909673008628 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17871742555 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644198802492 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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