In order to be successful people have two choices 1 To take risks 2 To keep cautious and careful Which one do you think is the better way to succeed Give reason to explain your choice

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In order to be successful, people have two choices

1)To take risks

2)To keep cautious and careful

Which one do you think is the better way to succeed? Give reason to explain your choice.

The behavior parten of people and the attitude towards risks could have an signficant influence on their sucess. Some people argue that man who is cautious and careful is of better chance to sucess. Nevertheless, from my perspective, one should be courage enough to take risks if he or she wish to sucess.

On the one hand, one factor of sucess - creativity - is highly related to taking risks. A major progress in any feild require innovation and creativity to make a big change. To create something new is highly risky as no one can foresee the effect of the invention. For instance, when Apple company first intrudence the conception of App Store, the risk of such invention is unmasureable. Although the conception sounded attracting - a smart phone with App Store could be embeded with funcations that could only be achieved by computers, there were acutually no App developed. However, Apple decieded to invest heavely in that program and their sucess is apparent as a era of smart phone is lead by Apple and the company gained countless profits from it.

On the onther hand, cautiousness and carefulness could merely reduce the chance of making mistakes instead of achieving huge sucess. For example, a bank clerk could be super patient and careful of his or her daily work, which keep help the clerk away from trouble form messing up. However, the chances are low that a huge promotion will occur to his or her by simply avioding mistakes because managers require other qulities such as skills of conmunication and the ability to extend potential custmer groups. Only by staying away from mistakes could hardly show the supervior his or her abilites.

In addition, in the fleid of Fiance, profits are explained as the make-up for bearing risks. In other world, if there is no risk, there is no gain as well. The courage of taking risks could create value in the eye of Fiance.

In summery, people should be more willing to take reasonable risks instead of being way too cautions in order to achieve somthing big because the couarge to take risks are the requirement of creativity and cautiousness and carefulness could lead to correct reasult instead of huge sucess.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92432432432 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60076558508 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
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Chars per sentence: 107.176470588 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438157616995 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473785826569 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867626942176 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563064083041 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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The behavior pattern of people and the attitude towards risks could have a significant influence on their success. Some people argue that a man who is cautious and careful is of a better chance of success. Nevertheless, from my perspective, one should be courageous enough to take risks if he or she wishes to succeed.

On the one hand, one factor of success - creativity - is highly related to taking risks. Significant progress in any field requires innovation and creativity to make a substantial change. To create something new is highly risky as no one can foresee the effect of the invention. For instance, when Apple company first introduce the conception of the App Store, the risk of such design is unmeasurable. Although the notion sounded attracting - a smartphone with the App Store could be embedded with functions that could only be achieved by computers, there was no App developed. However, Apple decided to invest heavily in that program, and its success is apparent as an era of the smartphone is lead by Apple, and the company gained many profits from it.

On the other hand, cautiousness and carefulness could merely reduce the chance of making mistakes instead of achieving colossal success. For example, a bank clerk could be super patient and careful of his or her daily work, which keeps helping the clerk away from trouble form messing up. However, the chances are low that a considerable promotion will occur to him or her by merely avoiding mistakes because managers require other qualities such as skills of communication and the ability to extend potential customer groups. Only by staying away from errors could hardly show the supervisor his or her abilities.

Besides, in the field of Finance, profits are explained as the make-up for bearing risks. In other words, if there is no risk, there is no gain as well. The courage of taking risks could create value in the eye of Fiance.

In summary, people should be more willing to take reasonable risks instead of being way too cautious about achieving something big because the courage to take risks is the requirement of creativity and cautiousness and carefulness could lead to correct result instead of enormous success.