in order to become successful, people should relate to others well
The first reason coming to mind is that nowadays having a great relationship can promote workers' productivity. Since problems are inevitable parts of each working, cooperation among employees allows workers to become prosperous in their jobs. In fact, if they can relate to people well, they are able to reach the pinnacle of their job easily. Hence, although some people believe that studying hard can guarantee the success of people, I strongly agree that if they can take others point of view by speaking with them, they certainly cannot become successful. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. My brother was a highly talented student when he was in school and university. He always was the first-ranked student in his class in each semester. For this reason, most companies were willing to employ him. Then, after hiring him, his boss found that he has a lot of problem in having a relationship with his co-workers, due to this disability, he missed his job easily, and his boss told him that you cannot be successful if you cannot relate well to your co-workers.
Another reason why I agree with it is that due to the competitive atmosphere of the market, people should relate well to people. In fact, the satisfaction of people especially customers can lead them to become successful. In addition to the importance of people's satisfaction, they should become familiar with the wide variety ways of attracting people to reach their goals. For example, when I was a bachelor student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I had an interview with professor Nejati who is a famous businessman in my country. Subsequently, He told me that a high percentage of successful people are the ones who know how to speak with a customer. He also told me that recently several courses were added to the business major that one of them is named “costumer’s language" which enable people to relate better with costumer in order to become successful in their work. As a result, I strongly believe that the more people familiar with the way of interacting well with people, the more they will be successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 698, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...hen he was in school and university. He always was the first-ranked student in his class i...
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Line 1, column 876, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... hiring him, his boss found that he has a lot of problem in having a relationship with his co-wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92953929539 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91023096349 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0546812993 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280694963629 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805707470034 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840593653103 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216937765264 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768146442349 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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