In order to successful, people have two choices
1)to take risks
2)to keep cautious and careful
which one do you think the better way tp succeed?
People love to pursue the success and they have many ways to choose. For these two choices which may lead to success, I prefer to keep cautious and careful for some aspects.
Though taking risks may usually company with creations that may help people gain more attractive progress and huge competition ability, leading them to the success, the usual situations are that it is difficult for them to make creative things and these risks can always bring costs that cannot be easily saved. For example, my uncle ran a construction company in the past and he wanted to enlarge his company by researching high technology. In that period, he refused any construction program in order to put all efforts on creation. He really took risks and at last he failed so that he lost all things, including his original achievements.
However, doing things cautiously and carefully can avoid some situations like that. Success requires us not to choose the wrong way anytime and it may not give us a second time to choose again. Thus, it is fundamental to consider every aspect before making decisions and evaluate whether the consumption could be neutralized by the benefit. In this progress, we think and discuss in our minds, realizing what costs we can take and tolerate. As a result, we can have little possibility to take risks that might cause damages to us without any benefit in return. Therefore, we can avoid wrong decisions and approach success.
Plus, caution and carefulness can also bring trust from others. Think about that, if someone is careful and cautious, he may take everything into considerations seriously，and the result may be that he finishes anything efficiently. In this way, others may appreciate his serious attitudes towards any task and hold the view that he is a responsible person that is worth relying on. Consequently, they will prefer to work with him with trust. Gaining friends and achieving trust, success will come to him soon or later.
To sum up, risks are controlled and attitudes are cautious, and we can succeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... Though taking risks may usually company with creations that may help people gain...
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Suggestion:
...s, including his original achievements. However, doing things cautiously and car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96802325581 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69337160608 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6138700722 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9444444444 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123192664279 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394818586563 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396139121262 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800484889623 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407624768046 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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