our current way of life have a negative impact on future generation.
Today’s life has become very advanced with the development of the science and technology in almost every field. The dependency of our life on such modern technology is increasing very fast and it is almost impossible to assume our any day with the help of technology. It has facilitated our life by many ways and make our routine very easier compare to the earlier days. The process and task we get ourselves involved every day is ultimately with the use of new technology.
The use of computer in our personal work as well as the professional project, us of mobile to reach to our beloved ones without wasting of time, use of transportation like car , airplane and train to meet someone. These all tasks are impossible without the help of advance technology. However the limited use of all this and how to use it, is the point on which we identify the positive and negative consequences of our dependency on it.
To elaborate this, let’s take the example of the computer. Today’s life in almost impossible without the help of computer, but the difference between the use of it to enhance our academic knowledge and use it to just play a game is the prominent factor to be considered. With the overuse of such gadgets leads children to waste more time in just sitting in form of the screen. It leads to the reduction in the physical exercise and result the obesity, which is very dangerous, also it damage the eye site.
Moreover, the excessive use of the mobile is now a days a very big subject to be concerned about. The elders are much habituated to spend their time spending with mobile without any important work but in surfing and social media. What if young generation surrounded by them get inspired to do the same thing which they show around them? They are not so mature to differentiate between the uses in in a good or bad way. Which attract them to use them very earlier stage of life which hinder their academic career and ultimately ruin their future.
Moreover, the excessive use of transportation is also the major issue. To use car for walkable distance cause the traffic problems as well as damage the environment. Global warming is the worldwide issue which is the result of the pollution. If there will not be the proper balance in the atmosphere, it harm the rain cycle and the farming also. Hence our future generation will not have to enough food to eat and the safe environment to live.
In conclusion, However science and technology are unavoidable part of our life and very helpful to make our life facilitated, but the limited use of it is also important. The give the safe and healthy environment is also our prime responsibility. We all have to be sure about the limited and profitable dependency towards the modernization. After all we are the ultimate guide and well visors of our progenies and they will enjoy what we gift them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, after all, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69108910891 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70406361554 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467326732673 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 793.8 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7130910406 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.76 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198219620869 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527060605778 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671817372445 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101640523602 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452845403568 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.