parent today do not have enough time to spend with their kids it is better to spend that time playing=g games or sprots with their kids , other people believe that they should spend time doing things related to schoolwork?
Since the beginning of the current century, the cost of living has become higher than before, so parents work as much as they can to earn more money. Moreover, parents do not have enough time to spend with their kids. Some people believe that parent should make use of that time by playing games or sports with tier kids, however other people think that they should spend that time doing something related to schoolwork. In my point of view, I believe that parent better to spend that time playing games or sports with their children because that strengthens their relationship, build up their kids’ physical fitness, and encourage kids to paly spots.
The foremost point, parents who usually paly sports with their kids have a strong relationship with them. For example, in Canada schools decided that do decline any schoolwork at home in order to let kids enjoy their free time with their parents which strengthens the relationship in one family. Furthermore, it makes kids happier and more relaxed. Consequently, spending time playing with kids is significant for any family.
Next, couple with strengthens the relationship in the family, building up kids’ physical fitness is another reason why it is important to spend time playing sports with kids. A survey conducted by the Oxford university found that kids who spent their free time playing sports with their parents are healthier. In addition to that, engaging with any sport can minimize the risk of some disease such as autism and OCD. Therefore, playing sports has a positive impact on kids features.
Finally, playing sports with kids encourage them to implement in the national teams. For example, in Egypt most of the player of the national soccer team spent time to paly these sports with their parents when they were young. Provided that parents encourage their kids to plays sport, they can have great benefits to the society. As a result, spending time having fun with kids is imperative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03975535168 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44634938472 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507645259939 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4176197913 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.598976851037 0.236089414692 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24097264993 0.076458572812 315% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150489416051 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.426169933193 0.150856017488 283% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125092840842 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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