Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.
The children's education has always been attached great importance since children are not only the future of families but also countries. Some people doubt that today's parents pay more attention to their children's education compared to parents in the past as a result of the overwhelming stress put on people today. However, I am still in favor of the view that parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.
Firstly, today's parents know more about the importance of education than did parents in the past since more of them have been educated and benefited from education. Many countries and organizations have made their effort to improve the average education level in order to help more people have capabilities to make a living by themselves and shake off poverty. In a consequence, those people who have abtained essential knowledge and skills for living by education are going to have a more sensible understanding of what education means to a person as well as their children. Therefore, they are more likely to attach greater importance on their children's education and be willing to be involved in their education than were parents in the past.
Secondly, parents nowadays have much more capabilities to get involved in their children's education today since they possess more knowledge and skills than parents had in the past. We actually can compare parents and their children in education to lakes with different capacity and lattitude. The lake with bigger capacity and higher lattitude can supplies the lake with smaller capacity and lower lattitude by flowing water just like the parents can teach their children using their knowledge. Furthermore, the bigger lake's capacity and latitude determine how much it can do this job which is like how much knowledge parents have determines how far they can educate their children.
Admittedly, there is the phenomenon that today's parents are too busy on their work to care about their children's education. Nevertheless, we can not ignore the effort that most of today's parents make on their children's education.
In a nutshell, I hold that today's parents are more involved in their children's education than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
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Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the todays') or simply say ''most todays''.
Suggestion: most of the todays; most todays
...less, we can not ignore the effort that most of todays parents make on their childrens educati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14420062696 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65789314809 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.011832375 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.643753604695 0.236089414692 273% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.307963703266 0.076458572812 403% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202313618031 0.0737576698707 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.457056105571 0.150856017488 303% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11803679482 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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