Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that today parents are more sensitive about educational issues of their children than parents were in the past. They precisely, undertaking every event related to children school. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that parents attention to the education of their children and this matter did not change during time. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.
First and foremost, current parents are more aware of the importance of education in children's future life. Today most jobs are so complex, and an appropriate educational background is necessary for people how to pursue professional jobs. The simple previous jobs are now completely disappeared or they cannot ensure a secure and satisfying life. For example, in the past, most of the people were employed in the farms. But today because of technological progress of agricultural machines the number of labors per acre of each land decreased remarkably.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that new parents are mainly educated people, so they have comprehensive information about children educational requirement. For instance, my grandmother says that her parents not only had any knowledge about her lessons at school, but also they sometimes discourage her as study at school. Maybe it was because parents in the past were so busy with daily tasks and a lot of kids.
Finally, yet importantly, yet importantly, today teachers, school advisers, psychologists and society, expectation especial attention of parents to the education of their children. All schools recall parents to participate in a weekly or monthly meeting with the teacher, in order to be aware of kids weakness and help instructors to solve it. Moreover, government determine some punishments for short-come parents in study issue of their children.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents in the past. Because parents now are realized the impact of proper education on children life, they know how should assist children in their study and it is a task that demanded from them by society.
- life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children. 73
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 70
- TPO 31 3
- People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co workers than from those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors 48
- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28418230563 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81761911828 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538873994638 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8545751281 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.941176471 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.602844844148 0.236089414692 255% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218168089105 0.076458572812 285% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210410312539 0.0737576698707 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369950625277 0.150856017488 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185900555629 0.0645574589148 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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