The passage abd lecture are both discussing the posibility to chanege of keeping pateint medical records from papers to electrical method. The writer elaborates on three advantages from using electrical database for keeping patient medical records. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She mentions, these advantages are impracticl.
First, the author states, electric records can help to reduce costs by saving money on storing and transfering medical records. however, the professor reputs this benefit. She states, cilinc which use elecric records still need papar for taking binformation from patient. In addition, doctors do not throw out these papers record because, they may need them in emergency time. Therefore, it still need for storage to keep these papers and transfer them.
Second, the athor argues, electric records preventing errore. This is due to the faact, this method dose not need to hand writing. In contrast, it is organized way.
This argument refuted by lecturer, She points out, although that method is organized, but we need staffs vto put on information in computer, therefore mistake still may happen even in using electric records.
Finally, the author, illustrates to aiding result to electric recors is easy annd making possible of gather amount of data. The professor in the other hand states, access to all data still have privicy. If we want to access any information, we should have permision. Moreover some pateint do not accept to access their information.
The passage abd lecture are both discussing the posibility to chanege of keeping pateint medical records from papers to electrical method. The writer elaborates on three advantages from using electrical database for keeping patient medical records. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She mentions, these advantages are impracticl.
First, the author states, electric records can help to reduce costs by saving money on storing and transfering medical records. however, the professor reputs this benefit. She states, cilinc which use elecric records still need papar for taking binformation from patient. In addition, doctors do not throw out these papers record because, they may need them in emergency time. Therefore, it still need for storage to keep these papers and transfer them.
Second, the athor argues, electric records preventing errore. This is due to the faact, this method dose not need to hand writing. In contrast, it is organized way.
This argument refuted by lecturer, She points out, although that method is organized, but we need staffs vto put on information in computer, therefore mistake still may happen even in using electric records.
Finally, the author, illustrates to aiding result to electric recors is easy annd making possible of gather amount of data. The professor in the other hand states, access to all data still have privicy. If we want to access any information, we should have permision. Moreover some pateint do not accept to access their information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage abd lecture are both discuss...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...se for keeping patient medical records. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in t...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...toring and transfering medical records. however, the professor reputs this benefit. She...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'needs'?
Suggestion: needs
... in emergency time. Therefore, it still need for storage to keep these papers and tr...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... information, we should have permision. Moreover some pateint do not accept to access th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 240.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.325 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56546237981 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5430374398 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1764705882 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1176470588 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445301086066 0.236089414692 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130098867469 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204460144235 0.0737576698707 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239154510545 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.273675726563 0.0645574589148 424% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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