The reading and passage are both discus the effect of increase of population and agriculture in declination of bird population. The author claim that increase in settlement and growth of agriculture in addition to increase in using of pesticide will cause decrease in bird’ population. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She states that, the claims which are given by author inconvenient.
First, the author says that increase in population and settlement will decrease habitats used by birds, therefor, decreasing of suitable places for birds causes declination of the birds. This point challenged by lecturer. She mentions that is increasing in urban like building will decrease some types of birds, but will cause increasing of other types which can find urban as a good habitat.
Second, the writer argues that increasing in settlement will need increase in agriculture, therefor more land used for growing of crops, hence decreasing in the habitats used for birds. The professor rebuts this argument. She mentions, its true that agriculture harm the birds but it is not like the same degree which is mentioned in article, furthermore, there is decreasing in the amount of land that uses for agriculture year after year, in addition increase of agriculture will lead to increase of amount of crops.
Finally, the author points out to increasing in agriculture will causes increase in using of pesticides which will decrease in bird’ population or prevent their reproduction. In the other hand, the professor suggests, production of new brand of pesticide will little effect on plants, moreover, planting of new generations of crops with different genes that are not effected by pesticides will solve this issue.
The reading and passage are both discus the effect of increase of population and agriculture in declination of bird population. The author claim that increase in settlement and growth of agriculture in addition to increase in using of pesticide will cause decrease in bird’ population. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She states that, the claims which are given by author inconvenient.
First, the author says that increase in population and settlement will decrease habitats used by birds, therefor, decreasing of suitable places for birds causes declination of the birds. This point challenged by lecturer. She mentions that is increasing in urban like building will decrease some types of birds, but will cause increasing of other types which can find urban as a good habitat.
Second, the writer argues that increasing in settlement will need increase in agriculture, therefor more land used for growing of crops, hence decreasing in the habitats used for birds. The professor rebuts this argument. She mentions, its true that agriculture harm the birds but it is not like the same degree which is mentioned in article, furthermore, there is decreasing in the amount of land that uses for agriculture year after year, in addition increase of agriculture will lead to increase of amount of crops.
Finally, the author points out to increasing in agriculture will causes increase in using of pesticides which will decrease in bird’ population or prevent their reproduction. In the other hand, the professor suggests, production of new brand of pesticide will little effect on plants, moreover, planting of new generations of crops with different genes that are not effected by pesticides will solve this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading and passage are both discus ...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
...lination of bird population. The author claim that increase in settlement and growth ...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ill cause decrease in bird’ population. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in t...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich are given by author inconvenient. First, the author says that increase in ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich can find urban as a good habitat. Second, the writer argues that increasin...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l lead to increase of amount of crops. Finally, the author points out to increa...
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Line 4, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed by pesticides will solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27697841727 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82707496899 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482014388489 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1813582859 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.60391718678 0.272083759551 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239312717993 0.0996497079465 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21784006683 0.0662205650399 329% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409423111445 0.162205337803 252% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170829158324 0.0443174109184 385% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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