The passage and lecture about the effectiveness of eco-certification that wood companies in united states might do. The writer cliams several reasons explain, this certification on wood companies is not effective. The lecturer in the other hand casts doubt on claim made in the article. and contradicts each reason.
First, the author states, american people do not trust to much advertising, therefore, they wiil not pay attention to eco-certification. The lecturer refutes this statement. He mentions, american customers do not treat all advertisment the same. They can be distinguish between products, then can choose which one better. so they can know the advantages of eco-certified wood and purchase it.
Second, the author elaborates high cost of certified wood. American consumer alwayes take price in their account. This argument is challenge by professor. He states. of course every person pay attention to price, but amarican people, but this occur if there is a high competetion of high difference in price. because of certifird wood has more value with little elevation in price. Therefore the high cost will not affect the customers.
Finally, the author state, good business for american companies if make bussuiness with foregin companies. the lecturer in the other hand says, this occur if there is ahigh competition between wood companies. consumers alwayes prefer their products rather than other foregin companies products.
The passage and lecture about the effectiveness of eco-certification that wood companies in united states might do. The writer cliams several reasons explain, this certification on wood companies is not effective. The lecturer in the other hand casts doubt on claim made in the article. and contradicts each reason.
First, the author states, american people do not trust to much advertising, therefore, they wiil not pay attantion to eco-certification. The lecturer refutes this statement. He mentions, american costemers do not treat all advertisment the same. They can be distingush between prodects, then can choose which one better. so they can know the advantages of eco-certified wood and purchase it.
Second, the author elaborates high cost of certified wood. American consumer alwayes take price in their account. This argument is challenge by professor. He states. of course every person pay attention to price, but amarican people, but this occur if there is a high competetion of high difference in price. because of certifird wood has more value with little elevation in price. Therfore the high cost will not affect the custemores.
Finally, the author state, good bussiness for american companies if make bussuiness with foregin companies. the lecturer in the other hand says, this occur if there is ahigh competetion between wood companies. consumers alwayes prefer their products rather than other foregin companies products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48878923767 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96725478129 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3907801856 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 110.228320801 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3888888889 21.698381199 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448652916529 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123724972196 0.0996497079465 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179954985942 0.0662205650399 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302362775333 0.162205337803 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.318533691848 0.0443174109184 719% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.67 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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