Without any doubt, choosing a career is a critical life decision that will significantly affect the quality of one's life. Therefore, there are many factors which are needed to put into consideration in the process of decision making, among which the security and the future of the job are some of the most noticeable ones. Although many people believe that in present times, this decision making is much easier than before due to the recent advancement of technology and economics, I would argue that in the past, people could predict the future of their business to some extent; therefore, they could realize which career would be more suitable and profitable for them. There are manifold reasons for that, among which today's rapidly-changing world and the increased complexity of modern society are the most conspicuous ones.
First off, it is crystal clear that in comparison to the past, today's world is changing at a galloping rate. This fast-paced evolution has led to trouble in keeping up with the pace and made predicting the future harder than ever. The skills needed to work today change so fast that many people fall behind the trend and have no idea how to take the next step, let alone predict the future of a chosen career. Most importantly, the radical changes in our society mean that people need new kinds of skills, many of which are not yet fully understood for learning and require putting a lot of effort. However, this increased effort is accompanied by an increased risk of not being successful in the future which made paving the career path more difficult than before.
Another reason to support this idea is that today's world has virtually become more complex and diverse in all aspects, and therefore people have to strive to overcome more obstacles all of which obscure one's vision for his or her future. In addition, a great deal of time and energy would be needed to handle these factors along the way, remaining not enough time for scrutinizing the future and security of the job thoroughly.
Thus, with all this taken into account, people nowadays have many difficulties probing varied occupations in order to find the most secure and successful career with which they can proceed. As mentioned above, the most important reasons are the complexity and fast-changing world which requires dedication to the whole process in order to achieve success.
- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future 76
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 76
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to sch 73
- Some parent offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 88
- TPO 35 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ill significantly affect the quality of ones life. Therefore, there are many factors...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ome more obstacles all of which obscure ones vision for his or her future. In additi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.965 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54793543874 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.745162208 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.769230769 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7692307692 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163251863493 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586973554669 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465111952811 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100686969421 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256470764916 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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