In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that choosing a job is the biggest concern for most young people and their family, because predicting which types of jobs would be provided a secure career is not a simple task any more. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that today because of widespread expansion of news resources and social networks people have access to update information about job positions and how each type of jobs is required by the society. However, I, to a great extent agree with this idea that in the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would be lead to a secure, successful future.
First and foremost, because our world change so rapidly, some types of jobs are not demanding any more. For example, when I was a child most of the airplanes navigated by three-person, pilot, co-pilot and flight engineer. Notwithstanding, today all of these kinds airplanes are outdated and a job with the name of a flight engineer gone completely. I know that a lot of them employed in the unrelated job position with very lower payment or retired sooner than normal.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that today finding a permanent job is impossible or so hard. The main reason for this unfortunate condition could be a huge number of applicants for each available positions. In addition, because the temporary law of employment cannot care from employees in a properly, there is strong competition among co-workers which creates anxiety and lack of happiness.
Finally, yet importantly, in the recent years, governments try to prepare accurate census about job demands to assist young people in their decision making for study at university and types of jobs that will be more demanding in the future. However, this work sometimes creates a bigger problem. For example, about twenty years ago our country required a mass of doctors. Thus, the government at this time increased the number of medical students at the universities. But, today all of the hospitals are full of doctors and they are in difficulty to find a job.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I, am convinced that in the past it was easier to identify what type of career would be lead to a successful future. Because of today world change so quickly, job security decreased remarkably and the government's plans were not successful until now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 480, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tudents at the universities. But, today all of the hospitals are full of doctors and they ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92909535452 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72812432755 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0774304038 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.588235294 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362472969878 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112474231876 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187703283452 0.0737576698707 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213329626601 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184692183874 0.0645574589148 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.