In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Whether depending on our parents or not to make our own decisions has been a controversial debate in today's life. I agree with the statement that today young people can make their own decisions better than before. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I believe that the recent generation is able to make their own decisions by themselves since they are well-educated than before. A few decades ago, most of the people worked on farms, as a result, parents would control their kids' choices as the family worked together, they also lived close to each other. However, currently, almost all the people finish high school diploma. Moreover, most of the people attending university. My personal experience is an expelling illustration of this point. As I finished pharmacy school, I decided to work in a hospital pharmacy. Yet my mother disagreed with me, she was worried from disease transmission as I am going to work close to patients. As a result, I explained to her the precautions that we follow during working in the pharmacy. At the end of the day, she was convinced that this choice is best for my career future.
Secondly, I totally agree with the statement as nowadays the internet has the upper hand in our life. There is no doubt that we can find all the information that we need online. In the past, internet access was not reliable for everyone, so the main source of social life was our parents as they considered more experienced than us. I remember when I was in college, I was confused about which subjects I should choose to increase my GPA and would be useful in my major at the same time. In the beginning, I asked my father's advice. As my father did not experience this situation before, he could not help me. As a result, I searched online and finally, I found the perfect answer. Therefore, I chose the suitable materials that would help in my case.
To sum up, definitely the current generation capable to take his own decisions as he is more educated than before. In addition, thanks to the internet which facilitates our life's choices.
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- In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 70
- In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 70
- After they complete their university studies some students live in their hometowns others live in different towns or cities Which do you think is better living in your hometown or living in different towns or cities Give specific reasons for your answer 60
- Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave Do you agree or disagree Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer 70
- Some people think that parents should plan their children s leisure time carefully Other people believe those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time Which idea do you agree with Give reasons for your choice 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et which facilitates our lifes choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6836461126 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65507607184 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55764075067 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7745988801 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4090909091 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244500405619 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612658592328 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105768732449 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165244472142 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149361056971 0.0645574589148 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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