In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Whether depending on our parents or not to make our own decisions has been a controversial debate in today's life. I agree with the statement that nowadays young people can make their own decisions better than before. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I believe that the recent generation is able to make their own decisions by themselves since they are well educated than before. A few decades ago, most of the people worked on farms, as a result, parents would control their kids' choices as the whole family worked together, they also lived close to each other. However, currently, almost all of the people finish high school diploma. Moreover, most of the people attending university. My personal experience is an expelling illustration of this point. As I finished pharmacy school, I decided to work in a hospital pharmacy. Yet my mother disagreed with me, she was worried form disease transmission as I am going to work close to patients. As a result, I explained to her the precautions that we follow during working in the pharmacy. At the end of the day, she was convinced that this choice is best for my career future.
Secondly, I totally agree with the statement as nowadays the internet has the upper hand in our life. Ther is no doubt that we can find all the information that we need online. In the past, internet access was not reliable for everyone, so the main source of social life was our parents as they considered more experienced than us. I remember when I was in college, I was confused about which subjects I should choose to increase my GPA and would be useful in my major at the same time. In the beginning, I asked my father's advice. As my father did not experience this situation before, he could not help me. As a result, I searched online and finally, I found the perfect answer. Therefore, I chose the suitable materials that would help in my case.
To sum up, definitely the current generation capable to take his own decisions as he is more educated than before. In addition, thanks to the internet which facilitates our life's choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... each other. However, currently, almost all of the people finish high school diploma. More...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66223404255 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62453379205 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3768671207 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6818181818 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238643009144 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589427344589 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978533678567 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161131303145 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142926519424 0.0645574589148 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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