Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the young people's ability to make decisions about their own lives. However, whether this ability today is much better than it was in the past is a controversial issue. My view is that today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives than in the past, not more depending on their parents to make decisions for them.
First, it is obvious that today young people have more ways and resource to learn more knowledge and information than before, which contributes to the improvement of the ability of the young people to make decisions for themselves. This is because with the development of the information technology and the widespread usage of telephones and laptops, more and more young people have the access to the information they need for their lives and could make choices more independently. So, in this respect, nowadays, the young people are much better to make decisions about their own lives for themselves.
Moreover, to some extent, the parents today may not do better than their kids on searching and getting the information that they need. For example, when facing a problem, taking a problem in the textbook as an example, the parents would tend to find the solutions from the books while the kids would try to search the answers in the Internet, the more convenient and updated way to get more correct and in time solutions. This difference usually comes from the old thoughts of parents, that the telephones and the Internet are just the distraction and would induce their children to play games and even enchanted in the games, causing their masks fall down.
This is not to say that children today do not need the helps and suggestions of their parents and could make their decisions totally by themselves. Of cause, just like in the past, kids are always relatively naive, compared with their parents. This results into the easy-making decisions of the children, which are usually unreasonable and even harmful for their lives. At this moment, parents' opinions become important and should be taken into consideration by the young people. But kids do not need to agree all the opinions of their parents since their opinions may sometime be too outdated.
In sum, we should encourage young people today to make their decisions by themselves instead of relying on their parents to make decisions for them. Meanwhile, we should not ignore that children should also listen to their parents' thoughts and experience when making decisions. By doing this, we could make sure that young people could make better and more comprehensive decisions for their own lives.
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to s 70
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.-Wait until the class or meeting is 70
- It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation 60
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to s 60
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...of people are concerned about the young peoples ability to make decisions about their o...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: Of course
... their decisions totally by themselves. Of cause, just like in the past, kids are always...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00224215247 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55975756364 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412556053812 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4478508146 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.235294118 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2352941176 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.641642861055 0.236089414692 272% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259212357641 0.076458572812 339% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202883442127 0.0737576698707 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416855526728 0.150856017488 276% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209418747504 0.0645574589148 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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