In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
The question is whether the young were dependent to their family to make decision in the past more than now or not. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I am inclined to affirm that today's, an independence surge is being observed among youths and some factors can affect this condition. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
To begin with, nobody could overlook the fact that in the past, the level of public information in the societies was low; consequently, children were wrestling with lack of data. It goes without saying that since there were not universities enough or people could rarely travel; hence, obtaining experience was a complex procedure. The young were relying on their parents' experiences. One should not forget that in the past era, making decision without permission or consultation of the old could not be a respectable behavior; however, nowadays families provide a freedom bed for their children; as a result, this circumstance has led them to improve their confidence.
Second reason for my argument lies in the reality of technology. Needless to say that technology has been keeping marching forward and since the households are thin compared with the past, so a wide range of electronic devices and high speed of internet have been provided for the young people. Now it is believed that internet is ruling in all over the world. Everything you need from basic information about cooking an egg to the most complex scientific or social data are available on the internet. Such a great situation will assist the youths to gain their needed factors for making new decisions. Even more, human beings can connect with each other in every point of this modern world and share their opinions and experiences with each other.
Moreover, there is a bit of different here. With changing communities, living beings' personality has altered; subsequently, in attending of all mentioned factors above, the young children have become selfish and unfortunately they believe that their parents are involved with old-fashioned thoughts; as a result, the young reject their advice.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that these days societies have been experiencing severe shifts and these currents have influenced on people's personality. The young prefer to trust on their experiences which have been acquired through their peers or internet.
- tpo47 70
- the state should set fines or penalties for companies which produce pollution or it should find other ways to deal with the pollution problem. which one is better? 90
- Tpo25 79
- Do you agree or disagree?Media are less concerned about the accuracy of news in compared with the past. 90
- do you agree or disagree?playing sport teaches people more lessons of life. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...here. With changing communities, living beings personality has altered; subsequently, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, i feel, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19117647059 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74539564213 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59068627451 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5748712751 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.375 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277937002485 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912475416729 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905258067371 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149140776521 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358879411773 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.