People Attend College Or University For Many Different Reasons (for Example, New Experiences, Career Preparation, Increased Knowledge). Why Do You Think People Attend College Or University? Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer.
People have different aims for attending a school. These aims may depend on the circumstances of the people. In my opinion, people go to university or college for having a good job in the future and increasing the knowledge they have.
To begin with, going to university offers a good carreer in the future. A lot of business companies are looking for the people who took a high level of education. So it makes people to attend a school, it is like an obligation today. If a person doesn`t go to a college he or she is more likely to find no good job. My experience is a good example of this. I can recall a friend that she didn`t like to study and her grades at high school were on the ground. After she graduated from high school, she decided not to attend a university. A few years later she got married without having a job. Unfortunately she got divorced. She had no source of money and she realized that if she had attended a university her life would be different. After that, she went to a university and became a lawyer, so she is happy now.
Furthermore, going to a school leads a high level of knowledge and also helps learning new things. There are lots of sophisticated information in the school`s curriculum. If a person wants to have a deeper understanding of the world, he\she should attend a university or a college. For instance, I had no idea about Spanish language until I took the Spanish course at the university. I knew that Spanish is the second most spoken language in the world, so i took the course. I learnt a lot of things about Spain and its culture as well. So attending to university helped me to gain more knowledge.
In conclusion, people attend a college to obtain a good job and to learn new things. In today`s world, whatever the reason is, people should go to a school to make himself\herself a better person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54277286136 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8578666789 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495575221239 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5302174674 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9565217391 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226871659512 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699156527936 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743104414912 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170950282326 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065381880393 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 10.9000537634 78% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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