People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?
Nowadays, many people prefer to go college or university for higher education, knowledge, career, degree. By attending college and university student gets more knowledge regarding specific subject, confidence, learning experience. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, Education is an important part of our life. By attending colleges and university people get knowledge and degree. Most of the people just attend university for degree. Attending college and university gives you knowledge specific to subject and you can be master in that subject also by attending this course you will get degree. Degree is an important to get good job in future. It will help us to move towards out career path. Most students in colleges or universities not only learn from theory but also from practical training. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, one of my friends she joined university for higher education in USA and she completed master’s in computer science from US university. After that she got master’s degree as well as it helps her to improve her programming skills.
Secondly, In college or university, students may come from different places with diverse cultures or life experiences so that it is more likely to have a chance to learn about other customs and cultures from their classmates. In addition, it is good ways for them to gain more experiences from participating in school activities or joining organizations. As a result, college seems be a perfect place in the hope of getting new experiences.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that everyone should attend the university for knowledge, experience, degree, higher education and career path, new experience. getting prepared for the future career, improving job position, subject matter interests and social status. For the above reasons, going to a college or university is the suitable place in the hope of improving themselves or achieving their goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
... specific subject, confidence, learning experience. I feel this way for two reasons, which...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... Degree is an important to get good job in future. It will help us to move towards out ca...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Getting
...cation and career path, new experience. getting prepared for the future career, improvi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, you know, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24299065421 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9133006335 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535825545171 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5726178898 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366356571838 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128881259202 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135781187711 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229540752646 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101703918159 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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