People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Nowadays, university admission has been one of the most significant parts of students' life in order to acquire knowledge or better job opportunities. It is clear that there would be much more reasons that conduct students for further education which we will discuss throughout this essay.
First of all, one of the most important reasons for attending university might be the essence of having certificates for jobs. It means, better job prospects and higher incomes require higher education as well as proof for that in the current employment system. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I could not be employed in prestigious companies due to the fact that I did not finish my education and the company needs a certificate for recruitment. Thus, the proof of people's qualification might force them into attending universities or colleges.
Secondly, there is some other reason such as parent's obligation that leads students to further education and university enrollments. In many cultures high educational level of youngsters is extremely important for families which mean parents provide any necessity for their children's education that makes avoiding further education become less acceptable to them. For instance, a scientific research has asserted that children in developing countries face a lot of pressure related to their educational issues because of their parents' expectations. Hence, it is correct to presume that in some cultures and societies there are some irrational reasons for higher education.
To conclude, although there are several reasons for attending colleges and universities such as improving knowledge or better job prospects, continuing education has some other less popular reasons. Therefore, it might be because of a piece of paper like certificate or parent's pressure for further education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
... less acceptable to them. For instance, a scientific research has asserted that children in developin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00202060826 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0482527051 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247562596922 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100158220456 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671999882285 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158854520835 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566901061548 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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