People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your opinion.

Clothes play an important role in the lives of human being as a basic need to them. Clothes protects our body from climate change and absorbs sweat from us. However, different type of clothes shows different behaviour depends on sitution persuaded by them. In my opinion, clothes shows our attitude of "how we are" in many cases. My reasons are as follows.

In school days we have a common dress code called "uniform", the concept of this dress code is to show the equality between rich and poor and also elevates their discipline among children. During fests in schools we have fancy dress competition, in that we can wear any costume of an action figure which we used to see in TV cartoons. I got a prize in that competition which is one of my sweet memories in my childhood. At home, we have different attitude. We are free to wear any kind of dress normally we choose which are comfortable to our body. As far as Indian culture is considered, women in India normally prefer wearing a saree both inside and outside home. Always wearing a saree is difficult however, they habituate conditionally by giving respect to the customs. Men prefer shorts or comfort pants and t-shirts etc

Clothes influence people behaviour in different kinds if they purchace a new dress they will use for atleast three to four times without washing because in order to feel new dress experience. Our costume changes based on different events for examples if we are attending a marraige reception men usually prefer wearing a tuxedo or blazer and women prefer lenghty frocks or saree kind of stuff. If they are attending an interview they wear dresses which shows positive influence on inteviewer like in attractive clean and neat clothes which shows better impression. If we do not wear nice clothes or clothes with out of culture there is chance of getteng expelled from interview. If we attend parties or celebrations we normally wear casuals kind of stuff just for attractive appearance. In order to be stylish we not only prefer to dress code but also to so many features like hairstyle, shoes, watches, goggles etc. During festivals we normally take new clothes as a trend and sometimes we provide new clothes as a gift to some people who were dearer to us. During religious fests we should not wear torn clothes which may appear out of culture or it may shows some awkward influence on people.

Finally, clothes are one of the important basic need to human beings, they are utilised to comfort us and sometimes they displays our attitude to others in different situations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...n. At home, we have different attitude. we are free to wear any kind of dress norm...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'display'
Suggestion: display
...ilised to comfort us and sometimes they displays our attitude to others in different sit...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, for example, kind of, in many cases, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9738372093 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69782320911 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543604651163 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3508922269 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.647058824 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199163604698 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675044735363 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629347020176 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126629095851 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038106871665 0.0645574589148 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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